Hi Sonia!!! Gracias por echarme de menos. Yo tambien tengo ganas de trabajar y estar con vosotros, aunque sea a gritos. Tranquila por lo de Irlanda, seguro que Santiago sabe bien lo que hay que hacer. De todos modos esas becas salen siempre entre finales de Enero y Febrero, pero no se la fecha exacta. Yo estoy bien y pronto estaré de vuelta aunque se que os dejo en buenas manos. Un beso.
The Friday after to school, I am going to go to my home. There I eat and after I having a shower. When I am going to prepare for leave with my friends, we are going to go to the pub for drink something. We are speak about all things have happened us in the week.When it is at half past eight we are going to go to our homes for dinner and after go to then band.
Usually, I have dinner with my sister, because we have prepare for go to band and my parents aren’t in my home.This Friday we are going to dinner something light, because we haven’t got a lot of time.
At nine o’clock we are going to band with my friends until at twelve o’clock or quarter past twelve.
At eleven o’clock we are going to have a break for ten minutes.
When ban is finished my sister and I are going to my hose to clean the instruments and to watch the TV until we are going to tired and we are going to sleep.The Saturday morning I will do my home works and when I finish, I will go with my mother to buy to Villarrobledo.
We will come at half past one and we are going to prepare the lunch. When my father is going to come of work, we are going to eat, all together.
After lunch, I am going to clean my teeth and I will prepare for go with my friends to the park, to the pub, etc. At 6 o’clock, more or less, we will go to some house for see a film, this weekend I think we will go to Maria Jose’s house.
Usually we see love films, terrible films or comedy films; but some time we have seen cartoon films. When the film will finish everyone will go to our homes to dinner, to have a shower and to prepare for go out after. About eleven o’clock we stay in some place and we will go to the disco. There we will dance, song and take photographs.
The last day! The Sunday, I will get up for go to the church, because I am catechist of the little children. After of the church I will go to the pub with Ramon, more or less at twenty past twelve. There we will take some and speak for some time.
At half past one we will go to our homes to lunch. After lunch we will go with my friends to drink some coffee and after I will </strong>come to my home to study and prepare the school bag for the Monday.
Finally, I am going to have a shower and I am going to dinner with my parents and my sister. After we will see “Los Protegidos” and when this TV series finish I am going to sleep.
Hello Sonia, I will rewrite your composition instead of writing your mistakes alone. It’s important you read your writings before hand in them. You always have the same mistakes and you must correct them.
ON Friday after school, I am going to go home. There, I will have lunch and afterwards I’m going to have a shower. Then, I am going to prepare for going out with my friends. We are going to go to the pub for drinking something.
We are going to speak about the things that have happened to us during the week. At half past eight we are going to go home for having dinner and after that we will go to the band.
I usually have dinner with my sister, because we go to the band together and my parents aren’t at home at that time.
On Friday we are going to eat something light, because we won’t have a lot of time.
We will be in the rehearsal from 9 o’clock till 12 o’clock more or less.
At eleven o’clock we will have a 10 minutes break.
When rehearsal finishes my sister and I are going to my house for cleaning the instruments and for watch TV until we get tired and fall asleep.
On Saturday morning I’m going to do my homework and when I finish, I’m going to go shopping with my mother to Villarrobledo.
We will come back at half past one and we are going to prepare the lunch. When my father comes from work, we are going to eat, all together.
After lunch, I am going to brush my teeth and I will prepare for going out with my friends to the park, to the pub, etc. At 6 o’clock, more or less, we will go to some house for watching a film. This weekend I think we will go to Maria Jose’s house.
We usually watch romantic films, horror films or comedies; but some times we have watched cartoon films. When the film finishes everyone will go home for having dinner, preparing for going out.
About eleven o’clock we are going to stay in some place and we are going to go to the disco. There we will dance, song and take photographs.
The last day!
On Sunday, I will get up for going to the church, because I am a catechist of little children. After leaving the church I will go to the pub with Ramon, more or less at twenty past twelve. There we will have something and talk for a while.
At half past one we will go home for having lunch. After lunch I am going to go with my friends to drink some coffee and afterwards I’m going to go back home to study and prepare the school bag for Monday.
Finally, I am going to have a shower and I am going to have dinner with my parents and my sister. Finally, we will see “Los Protegidos” and when this TV serie finishes I will go to bed.
The weeken:Saturday morning when i get up i am going to have breakfast.Then iam going to the sofa. Later i am going to have lunch. In the afternoon i am going to walk with my friends, later i am going to my house to have a shower. In the night i am going to have dinner and going to a party with my friends. Sunday morning when i get up i am going to have breakfast and go to my sister’s hause. After when i have to lunch i am going to my hause,with my siste and her boyfriend. In the afternoon i am going to my uncle’s hause to see her and my cousin. I am going to have dinner there and after i am going to my house to sleep.
Amparo I’m sorry but there are so many mistakes that the composition is totally wrong.
First, try to write things correctly. For example “I” is always a capital letter.
The tense BE GOING TO is always followed by an infinitive and you sometimes do it and sometimes don’t.
This weekend is going to be very funny. On Friday afternoon, I am going to prepare carnival with my friends. Later, I am going to go to an English lesson. At ten o’clock, I am going to have dinner and I am going to watch the television.
On Saturday, I am going to wake up at half past eight because I have to go a dance lesson at ten o’clock. Then I am going to have breakfast and after, my family and I are going to go to San Clemente. There, I am going to see dance different types of music, for example pop music because this Saturday I am not going to dance because I am lame. While, my parents, are going to buy clothes for carnival. When the dance classes finish I am going to go to my village and I am going to have lunch with my grandparents. After lunch, I am going to sleep a short time. At five o’clock my brother and I are going to play with the Wii. Later, I am going to study because the next week I have three exams. During the night, I am going to have a shower and I am going to go out whit my friends.
Finally, the Sunday is going to be a calm day. At nine o’clock, I am going to get up and I am going to study until the mealtime. On Sunday afternoon, my cousins are going to go to my village and we are going to watch television in my home. For finish my weekend my parents and I are going to Cañavate.
This is going to be my weekend with its good and bad things.
TO GO A DANCE: To go to a dance
THEN I AM: Then, I am…
GOING TO SEE DANCE DIFFERENT TYPES OF MUSIC: Going to see different types of dancing.
LAME: (Quizás sea mejor utilizar la palabra “INJURED” que quiere decir lesionado. Si utilizas “LAME” parece que digas que eres coja.)
WHILE: Meanwhile.
CLOTHES FOR CARNIVAL: Disguises
SLEEP A SHORT TIME: Sleep a little.
THE NEXT WEEK: Next week.
WHIT: with
THE SUNDAY IS GOING TO BE A CALM DAY: Sunday is going to be a quiet day
MY COUSINS ARE GOING TO GO TO MY VILLAGE: My cousins are going to come to my village.
IN MY HOME: At home.
FOR FINISH MY WEEKEND: For finishing my weekend.
Esmeralda, intenta cumplir el número de palabras que mando. Piensa que cuanto más escribes también te equivocas más.
This weekend I am going to go a Castellón with my cousin and my sister. The Friday we are going to arrive there of the night,later we are going to diner.The Saturday we are going to go the zoo. My cousin and me are going to get in the dolphins and are going to help one show with tigers. We are going to scare , but I am supposing they are going to train very good. The Sunday we are going to have parachuting and we are going to back of the afternoon.
TO GO A CASTELLON: To go to Castellón
THE FRIDAY: On Friday
WE ARE GOING TO ARRIVE THERE OF THE NIGHT: We will arrive there at night.
LATER WE ARE GOING TO DINER: Later on we are going to have dinner
MY COUSIN AND ME: My cousin and I
ARE GOING TO GET IN THE DOLPHINSAND ARE.. : Are going to swim with dolphins and WE are….
WE ARE GOING TO SCARE: We are going to be frightened
BUT I AM SUPPOSING: But I suppose
THEY ARE GOING TO TRAIN VERY GOOD: They are going to be well trained.
THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
HAVE PARACHUTING: Do parachuting
WE ARE GOING TO BACK OF THE AFTERNOON: We are going to be back in the afternoon.
Nerea I’m sorry but you haven’t done a good job. Don’t worry and try it again next time.
This weeken, the Friday in the afternoon, I am going to play the computer and I am going to be with my fiends. After, my family and I are gonig to see a movie in the night. The Saturday, I am going to do the homework in the morning and my boyfriend and I are gonigto go with the friends in the afternoon.My girlfrind, my boyfiend and I are going to go the party and we are going to dance. The Sunday, I am going to study.
WEEKEN: weekend
FIENDS: friends
AFTER: Afterwards
GONIG TO SEE A MOVIE IN THE NIGHT: Going to watch a movie at night.
THE SATURDAY: On Satuday.
GONIG TO GO WITH THE FRIENDS: Going to go out with some friends
MY GIRLFRIND, MY BOYFIEND AND I: My girlfriend, my boyfriend and I.
TO GO THE PARTY: To go to a party.
THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
This weekend I am going to go a Madrid, because I am going to see my grandsparents and my cousins. This saturday morning, I am going to buy clothes with my family and this saturday night I am going to go to dinner with my family to a Chinese restaurant. This is going to be very fun. After dinner I am going to play bowling. This sunday morning I am going to play football with my cousins and after I am going to eat a restaurant and after I am going to go my house.
GRANDSPARENTS: Grandparents
THIS SATURDAY: On Saturday
THIS SATURDAY NIGHT: On Saturday night
GO TO DINNER: Go to have dinner
VERY FUN: Very funny.
THIS SUNDAY: On Sunday
AFTER I: Afterwards I
EAT A : Eat at a restaurant (Con tu frase lo que dices es que te vas a comer un restaurante…ejem…)
AFTER I AM GOING TO GO TO MY HOUSE: Mejor “Finally, I am going to go back home”.
This weekend, I am going to go to Albacete with my parents. The Saturday, we are going to go to the shopping center all the day. In the night, we are going to go to the cinema to see a film. Later, we are going to go to house to sleeping. The Sunday, we are going to get up early. My mum and my are going to go to the park to walk. My father, is going to run during one hour. More later, we are going to turn to La Alberca de Zancara.
THE SATURDAY: On Saturday.
ALL THE DAY: The whole day.
GO TO HOUSE TO SLEEPING: Go to bed.
THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
MY: me
FATHER, IS GOING: Father is going…
DURING ONE HOUR: For one hour.
MORE LATER: Later
WE ARE GOING TO TURN TO: We are going to go back to La Alberca…
This weekend, on Saturday, I am going to sleep and I am going to buy the bread at half past eleven. At night, I am going to go out with my friends. We are going to go to dance and drink.
On Sunday, I am going to get up at half past one, because I am going to be tired.
This weekend, I am going to do a lot of things. First, the Friday afternoon, I am going to stay in the El Provencio for test the dance of education physique. Later, when we are going to finish, I am going to go my village, and I am going to go out with my friends. The Saturday morning, I am going goto Albacete with my parents of shopping. Later, we are going to have lunch there. In the afternoon, I am going to go to San Clemente with my best friend for see a film in the cinema. In the night, we are going to go out with our others friends.
The Sunday, I am going to study all the day.
-THE FRIDAY: On Friday
-THE EL PROVENCIO: EL PROVENCIO
-FOR TEST THE DANCE OF EDUCATION PHYSIQUE: For the physical education (or P.E.) test on acrosport.
-WHEN WE ARE GOING TO FINISH: Esta frase no es de futuro. Sería un subjuntivo en español. WHEN WE FINISH.
-GO MY: Go to my village.
-THE SATURDAY: On Saturday
-GOING GO TO ALBACETE WITH MY PARENTS OF SHOPPING: Going to go shopping to Albacete with my parents.
-FOR SEE A FILM IN THE CINEMA: For watching a movie at the cinema.k
-WITH OUT OTHERS FRIENDS: With the rest of our friends.
-THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
-ALL THE DAY: The whole day.
This weekend I am going to travel a New York for buy many clothes with my sister and my brother.
After, we are going to ride a hot air balloon, and we goint to throw from a parachute too.
Next day, we goint to record a video with shakira in miami, and we goint to be famous and we will win much money.
Next month we going to return to Spain and we going to leave in many magazines.
-TRAVEL A: Travel to New York.
-FOR BUY: For buying.
-WE GOINT TO THROW FROM A PARACHUTE TOO: We are going to parachute
-WE GOINT TO RECORD A VIDEO: We are going to record a video
-shakira: Shakira
-miami: Miami
-WE GOINT TO BE FAMOUS: We are going to be famous
-MUCH MONEY: A lot of money
-WE GOING TO RETURN: We are going to come back to Spain.
-WE GOING TO LEAVE: We are going to leave. (pero no se qué quieres decir con esta frase.
Hellow Ana.
Queria decirte que estaba leyendo la redacción y me he dado cuenta de que se me han olvidado dos cosas, te la mando bien ¿vale? Te he puesto lo que se me habia olvidado en mayuscula. =)
Hi Ana. For this weekend I thought: “I am going to go to Alcalá with my uncle to visit my others uncles and my little cousin; but that ISN´T going to can be because my uncle is going to come back the Monday, so my plans have changed.
On Friday, I am going to go to La Alberca to try of acrosport and after dinner my mum and I are going to go my uncle´s birthday.
On Saturday, I am going to go to an lunch and at night I am going to of A party.
And on Sunday, after to study I am going to go out.
At the moment, these are my plans for this weekend.
- FOR THIS WEEKEND I THOUGHT: This weekend I think I …..
- OTHERS: other
- THE MONDAY: on Monday
- TO TRY OF ACROSPORT: for trying acrosport
- GO MY UNCLE’S BIRTHDAY: celebrate my uncle’s birthday
- I AM GOING TO GO TO AN LUNCH: I’m going to have lunch.
- I AM GOING TO OF A PARTY: I’m going to a party.
- AFTER TO STUDY: After studying.
HELLOW: hello
FOR THIS WEEKEND I THOUGHT: This weekend I thought….
OTHERS: Other
BUT THAT ISN’T GOING TO CAN BE: (que lío) But that won’t be possible.
THE MONDAY: On Monday
TO TRY OF ACROSPORT: To practise acrosport.
GO MY UNCLE’S BIRTHDAY: Go to my uncle’s birthday.
I AM GOING TO GO TO AN LUNCH: I am going to have a lunch
I AM GOING TO OF A PARTY: I am going to go to a party.
AFTER TO STUDY: After studying ( después de una preposición el verbo siempre acaba en -ing)
Alicia, vale la pena arriesgarse, pero no debes fallar en cosas que hemos visto en clase.
The next weekend, I am going to go being with all my friends, for make the preparations of carnival.
We will be all day together, will be twenty persons. We are going to make a great berbecueto eat!
We´re going to have a good time, because We will be together.
To night, we are going to wear a dress and we going to go dinner at a restaurant. After we going to go to the disco, where going to go all the youngs!
- THE NEXT WEEKEND: Next weekend
- TO GO BEING. I am going to be
- FOR MAKE THE PREPARATIONS: for making carnival preparations (LAS PREPOSICIONES VAN SEGUIDAS DE UN VERBO TERMINADO EN -ING)
- ALL DAY: The whole day
- WILL BE TWENTY PERSONS: there will be twenty people. (Se te ha olvidado el sujeto. El plural de persons es people).
- BERBECUE: Barbecue. (TO EAT es redundante).
- WE: we (no puede ir en mayúscula).
- TO NIGHT: Tonight
- WE ARE GOING TO WEAR A DRESS AND WE GOING TO GO DINNER AT: We are going to get dressed and we are going to have dinner at…
- WE GOING TO: We are going to
- WHERE GOING TO GO ALL THE YOUNGS: where all the teenagers go.
Hi Sonia!!! Gracias por echarme de menos. Yo tambien tengo ganas de trabajar y estar con vosotros, aunque sea a gritos. Tranquila por lo de Irlanda, seguro que Santiago sabe bien lo que hay que hacer. De todos modos esas becas salen siempre entre finales de Enero y Febrero, pero no se la fecha exacta. Yo estoy bien y pronto estaré de vuelta aunque se que os dejo en buenas manos. Un beso.
Hola Ana. Te hechamos de menos, esperamos que pronto estes de vuelta. Esperemos que te recuperes pronto.
Un besito
Alicia Galiano y Eva Sofía
The Friday after to school, I am going to go to my home. There I eat and after I having a shower. When I am going to prepare for leave with my friends, we are going to go to the pub for drink something.
We are speak about all things have happened us in the week.When it is at half past eight we are going to go to our homes for dinner and after go to then band.
Usually, I have dinner with my sister, because we have prepare for go to band and my parents aren’t in my home.This Friday we are going to dinner something light, because we haven’t got a lot of time.
At nine o’clock we are going to band with my friends until at twelve o’clock or quarter past twelve.
At eleven o’clock we are going to have a break for ten minutes.
When ban is finished my sister and I are going to my hose to clean the instruments and to watch the TV until we are going to tired and we are going to sleep.The Saturday morning I will do my home works and when I finish, I will go with my mother to buy to Villarrobledo.
We will come at half past one and we are going to prepare the lunch. When my father is going to come of work, we are going to eat, all together.
After lunch, I am going to clean my teeth and I will prepare for go with my friends to the park, to the pub, etc. At 6 o’clock, more or less, we will go to some house for see a film, this weekend I think we will go to Maria Jose’s house.
Usually we see love films, terrible films or comedy films; but some time we have seen cartoon films. When the film will finish everyone will go to our homes to dinner, to have a shower and to prepare for go out after.
About eleven o’clock we stay in some place and we will go to the disco. There we will dance, song and take photographs.
The last day!
The Sunday, I will get up for go to the church, because I am catechist of the little children. After of the church I will go to the pub with Ramon, more or less at twenty past twelve. There we will take some and speak for some time.
At half past one we will go to our homes to lunch. After lunch we will go with my friends to drink some coffee and after I will </strong>come to my home to study and prepare the school bag for the Monday.
Finally, I am going to have a shower and I am going to dinner with my parents and my sister. After we will see “Los Protegidos” and when this TV series finish I am going to sleep.
Hello Sonia, I will rewrite your composition instead of writing your mistakes alone. It’s important you read your writings before hand in them. You always have the same mistakes and you must correct them.
ON Friday after school, I am going to go home. There, I will have lunch and afterwards I’m going to have a shower. Then, I am going to prepare for going out with my friends. We are going to go to the pub for drinking something.
We are going to speak about the things that have happened to us during the week. At half past eight we are going to go home for having dinner and after that we will go to the band.
I usually have dinner with my sister, because we go to the band together and my parents aren’t at home at that time.
On Friday we are going to eat something light, because we won’t have a lot of time.
We will be in the rehearsal from 9 o’clock till 12 o’clock more or less.
At eleven o’clock we will have a 10 minutes break.
When rehearsal finishes my sister and I are going to my house for cleaning the instruments and for watch TV until we get tired and fall asleep.
On Saturday morning I’m going to do my homework and when I finish, I’m going to go shopping with my mother to Villarrobledo.
We will come back at half past one and we are going to prepare the lunch. When my father comes from work, we are going to eat, all together.
After lunch, I am going to brush my teeth and I will prepare for going out with my friends to the park, to the pub, etc. At 6 o’clock, more or less, we will go to some house for watching a film. This weekend I think we will go to Maria Jose’s house.
We usually watch romantic films, horror films or comedies; but some times we have watched cartoon films. When the film finishes everyone will go home for having dinner, preparing for going out.
About eleven o’clock we are going to stay in some place and we are going to go to the disco. There we will dance, song and take photographs.
The last day!
On Sunday, I will get up for going to the church, because I am a catechist of little children. After leaving the church I will go to the pub with Ramon, more or less at twenty past twelve. There we will have something and talk for a while.
At half past one we will go home for having lunch. After lunch I am going to go with my friends to drink some coffee and afterwards I’m going to go back home to study and prepare the school bag for Monday.
Finally, I am going to have a shower and I am going to have dinner with my parents and my sister. Finally, we will see “Los Protegidos” and when this TV serie finishes I will go to bed.
MARK: 8 (GR: 1,25- V:2-SP:1,75-CH:1,5-CHS:1,5)
The weeken:Saturday morning when i get up i am going to have breakfast.Then i am going to the sofa. Later i am going to have lunch. In the afternoon i am going to walk with my friends, later i am going to my house to have a shower. In the night i am going to have dinner and going to a party with my friends.
Sunday morning when i get up i am going to have breakfast and go to my sister’s hause. After when i have to lunch i am going to my hause,with my siste and her boyfriend. In the afternoon i am going to my uncle’s hause to see her and my cousin. I am going to have dinner there and after i am going to my house to sleep.
Amparo I’m sorry but there are so many mistakes that the composition is totally wrong.
First, try to write things correctly. For example “I” is always a capital letter.
The tense BE GOING TO is always followed by an infinitive and you sometimes do it and sometimes don’t.
Try it next time.
Mark: 2
MY WEEKEND
This weekend is going to be very funny. On Friday afternoon, I am going to prepare carnival with my friends. Later, I am going to go to an English lesson. At ten o’clock, I am going to have dinner and I am going to watch the television.
On Saturday, I am going to wake up at half past eight because I have to go a dance lesson at ten o’clock. Then I am going to have breakfast and after, my family and I are going to go to San Clemente. There, I am going to see dance different types of music, for example pop music because this Saturday I am not going to dance because I am lame. While, my parents, are going to buy clothes for carnival. When the dance classes finish I am going to go to my village and I am going to have lunch with my grandparents. After lunch, I am going to sleep a short time. At five o’clock my brother and I are going to play with the Wii. Later, I am going to study because the next week I have three exams. During the night, I am going to have a shower and I am going to go out whit my friends.
Finally, the Sunday is going to be a calm day. At nine o’clock, I am going to get up and I am going to study until the mealtime. On Sunday afternoon, my cousins are going to go to my village and we are going to watch television in my home. For finish my weekend my parents and I are going to Cañavate.
This is going to be my weekend with its good and bad things.
TO GO A DANCE: To go to a dance
THEN I AM: Then, I am…
GOING TO SEE DANCE DIFFERENT TYPES OF MUSIC: Going to see different types of dancing.
LAME: (Quizás sea mejor utilizar la palabra “INJURED” que quiere decir lesionado. Si utilizas “LAME” parece que digas que eres coja.)
WHILE: Meanwhile.
CLOTHES FOR CARNIVAL: Disguises
SLEEP A SHORT TIME: Sleep a little.
THE NEXT WEEK: Next week.
WHIT: with
THE SUNDAY IS GOING TO BE A CALM DAY: Sunday is going to be a quiet day
MY COUSINS ARE GOING TO GO TO MY VILLAGE: My cousins are going to come to my village.
IN MY HOME: At home.
FOR FINISH MY WEEKEND: For finishing my weekend.
Esmeralda, intenta cumplir el número de palabras que mando. Piensa que cuanto más escribes también te equivocas más.
MARK: 8,25 (GR: 1,75- VOC:1,5- SP:1- CH:2-CHS:2)
This weekend I am going to go a Castellón with my cousin and my sister.
The Friday we are going to arrive there of the night,later we are going to diner.The Saturday we are going to go the zoo. My cousin and me are going to get in the dolphins and are going to help one show with tigers. We are going to scare , but I am supposing they are going to train very good.
The Sunday we are going to have parachuting and we are going to back of the afternoon.
TO GO A CASTELLON: To go to Castellón
THE FRIDAY: On Friday
WE ARE GOING TO ARRIVE THERE OF THE NIGHT: We will arrive there at night.
LATER WE ARE GOING TO DINER: Later on we are going to have dinner
MY COUSIN AND ME: My cousin and I
ARE GOING TO GET IN THE DOLPHINSAND ARE.. : Are going to swim with dolphins and WE are….
WE ARE GOING TO SCARE: We are going to be frightened
BUT I AM SUPPOSING: But I suppose
THEY ARE GOING TO TRAIN VERY GOOD: They are going to be well trained.
THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
HAVE PARACHUTING: Do parachuting
WE ARE GOING TO BACK OF THE AFTERNOON: We are going to be back in the afternoon.
Nerea I’m sorry but you haven’t done a good job. Don’t worry and try it again next time.
MARK: 2
This weeken, the Friday in the afternoon, I am going to play the computer and I am going to be with my fiends. After, my family and I are gonig to see a movie in the night. The Saturday, I am going to do the homework in the morning and my boyfriend and I are gonig to go with the friends in the afternoon.My girlfrind, my boyfiend and I are going to go the party and we are going to dance. The Sunday, I am going to study.
WEEKEN: weekend
FIENDS: friends
AFTER: Afterwards
GONIG TO SEE A MOVIE IN THE NIGHT: Going to watch a movie at night.
THE SATURDAY: On Satuday.
GONIG TO GO WITH THE FRIENDS: Going to go out with some friends
MY GIRLFRIND, MY BOYFIEND AND I: My girlfriend, my boyfriend and I.
TO GO THE PARTY: To go to a party.
THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
MARK: 3,75 (GR: 1,5- VOC: 0,75- SP: 0,25- CH:0,5- CHS: 0,75)
This weekend I am going to go a Madrid, because I am going to see my grandsparents and my cousins. This saturday morning, I am going to buy clothes with my family and this saturday night I am going to go to dinner with my family to a Chinese restaurant. This is going to be very fun. After dinner I am going to play bowling. This sunday morning I am going to play football with my cousins and after I am going to eat a restaurant and after I am going to go my house.
GRANDSPARENTS: Grandparents
THIS SATURDAY: On Saturday
THIS SATURDAY NIGHT: On Saturday night
GO TO DINNER: Go to have dinner
VERY FUN: Very funny.
THIS SUNDAY: On Sunday
AFTER I: Afterwards I
EAT A : Eat at a restaurant (Con tu frase lo que dices es que te vas a comer un restaurante…ejem…)
AFTER I AM GOING TO GO TO MY HOUSE: Mejor “Finally, I am going to go back home”.
MARK: 5,25 (GR: 1,5 – VC: 1- SP: 0,75-CH:1-CHS:1)
This weekend, I am going to go to Albacete with my parents.
The Saturday, we are going to go to the shopping center all the day. In the night, we are going to go to the cinema to see a film. Later, we are going to go to house to sleeping.
The Sunday, we are going to get up early. My mum and my are going to go to the park to walk. My father, is going to run during one hour. More later, we are going to turn to La Alberca de Zancara.
THE SATURDAY: On Saturday.
ALL THE DAY: The whole day.
GO TO HOUSE TO SLEEPING: Go to bed.
THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
MY: me
FATHER, IS GOING: Father is going…
DURING ONE HOUR: For one hour.
MORE LATER: Later
WE ARE GOING TO TURN TO: We are going to go back to La Alberca…
MARK: 6,75 (GR:1,5- VOC:1- SP:1,5- CH:1,5- CHS:1,25)
This weekend, on Saturday, I am going to sleep and I am going to buy the bread at half past eleven. At night, I am going to go out with my friends. We are going to go to dance and drink.
On Sunday, I am going to get up at half past one, because I am going to be tired.
BUY THE BREAD: Buy bread
GO TO DANCE AND DRINK: Go dancing and drinking.
MARK: 4,25 (GR:1- V:1-SP:1,5-CH:0,25-CHS:0,5)
This weekend, I am going to do a lot of things. First, the Friday afternoon, I am going to stay in the El Provencio for test the dance of education physique. Later, when we are going to finish, I am going to go my village, and I am going to go out with my friends.
The Saturday morning, I am going go to Albacete with my parents of shopping. Later, we are going to have lunch there. In the afternoon, I am going to go to San Clemente with my best friend for see a film in the cinema. In the night, we are going to go out with our others friends.
The Sunday, I am going to study all the day.
-THE FRIDAY: On Friday
-THE EL PROVENCIO: EL PROVENCIO
-FOR TEST THE DANCE OF EDUCATION PHYSIQUE: For the physical education (or P.E.) test on acrosport.
-WHEN WE ARE GOING TO FINISH: Esta frase no es de futuro. Sería un subjuntivo en español. WHEN WE FINISH.
-GO MY: Go to my village.
-THE SATURDAY: On Saturday
-GOING GO TO ALBACETE WITH MY PARENTS OF SHOPPING: Going to go shopping to Albacete with my parents.
-FOR SEE A FILM IN THE CINEMA: For watching a movie at the cinema.k
-WITH OUT OTHERS FRIENDS: With the rest of our friends.
-THE SUNDAY: On Sunday.
-ALL THE DAY: The whole day.
MARK: 6,25 (GR:1- VOC:1,5- CH:1,5- CHS: 1,5 – SP: 1,5)
This weekend I am going to travel a New York for buy many clothes with my sister and my brother.
After, we are going to ride a hot air balloon, and we goint to throw from a parachute too.
Next day, we goint to record a video with shakira in miami, and we goint to be famous and we will win much money.
Next month we going to return to Spain and we going to leave in many magazines.
-TRAVEL A: Travel to New York.
-FOR BUY: For buying.
-WE GOINT TO THROW FROM A PARACHUTE TOO: We are going to parachute
-WE GOINT TO RECORD A VIDEO: We are going to record a video
-shakira: Shakira
-miami: Miami
-WE GOINT TO BE FAMOUS: We are going to be famous
-MUCH MONEY: A lot of money
-WE GOING TO RETURN: We are going to come back to Spain.
-WE GOING TO LEAVE: We are going to leave. (pero no se qué quieres decir con esta frase.
MARK: 5 (GR: 0,5- SP:1- CH:1,25 – CHS: 1- VOC: 1,25)
Hellow Ana.
Queria decirte que estaba leyendo la redacción y me he dado cuenta de que se me han olvidado dos cosas, te la mando bien ¿vale? Te he puesto lo que se me habia olvidado en mayuscula. =)
Hi Ana.
For this weekend I thought: “I am going to go to Alcalá with my uncle to visit my others uncles and my little cousin; but that ISN´T going to can be because my uncle is going to come back the Monday, so my plans have changed.
On Friday, I am going to go to La Alberca to try of acrosport and after dinner my mum and I are going to go my uncle´s birthday.
On Saturday, I am going to go to an lunch and at night I am going to of A party.
And on Sunday, after to study I am going to go out.
At the moment, these are my plans for this weekend.
HELLO ALICIA
- FOR THIS WEEKEND I THOUGHT: This weekend I think I …..
- OTHERS: other
- THE MONDAY: on Monday
- TO TRY OF ACROSPORT: for trying acrosport
- GO MY UNCLE’S BIRTHDAY: celebrate my uncle’s birthday
- I AM GOING TO GO TO AN LUNCH: I’m going to have lunch.
- I AM GOING TO OF A PARTY: I’m going to a party.
- AFTER TO STUDY: After studying.
MARK: 6,3 (G: 1,2-SP:2-COH:1,25-VOC:0,75-CHS:1)
HELLOW: hello
FOR THIS WEEKEND I THOUGHT: This weekend I thought….
OTHERS: Other
BUT THAT ISN’T GOING TO CAN BE: (que lío) But that won’t be possible.
THE MONDAY: On Monday
TO TRY OF ACROSPORT: To practise acrosport.
GO MY UNCLE’S BIRTHDAY: Go to my uncle’s birthday.
I AM GOING TO GO TO AN LUNCH: I am going to have a lunch
I AM GOING TO OF A PARTY: I am going to go to a party.
AFTER TO STUDY: After studying ( después de una preposición el verbo siempre acaba en -ing)
Alicia, vale la pena arriesgarse, pero no debes fallar en cosas que hemos visto en clase.
MARK: 4,5 (GR:1-VOC:1-SP:1,5- CH:0,5- CHS:0,5)
The next weekend, I am going to go being with all my friends, for make the preparations of carnival.
We will be all day together, will be twenty persons. We are going to make a great berbecue to eat!
We´re going to have a good time, because We will be together.
To night, we are going to wear a dress and we going to go dinner at a restaurant. After we going to go to the disco, where going to go all the youngs!
- THE NEXT WEEKEND: Next weekend
- TO GO BEING. I am going to be
- FOR MAKE THE PREPARATIONS: for making carnival preparations (LAS PREPOSICIONES VAN SEGUIDAS DE UN VERBO TERMINADO EN -ING)
- ALL DAY: The whole day
- WILL BE TWENTY PERSONS: there will be twenty people. (Se te ha olvidado el sujeto. El plural de persons es people).
- BERBECUE: Barbecue. (TO EAT es redundante).
- WE: we (no puede ir en mayúscula).
- TO NIGHT: Tonight
- WE ARE GOING TO WEAR A DRESS AND WE GOING TO GO DINNER AT: We are going to get dressed and we are going to have dinner at…
- WE GOING TO: We are going to
- WHERE GOING TO GO ALL THE YOUNGS: where all the teenagers go.
MARK: 4.75 (G: 1, SP: 1.5, COH: 0.5, V: 0.75, CHS: 1)